2025年中考英语写作培优课程第四讲校园生活导学案(1)（教师版＋学生版）

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中考英语写作培优课程讲义第四讲
校园生活类作文
进步目标
★★★★Level ④
通过学习和训练，你能够：
［1］识记校园生活类主题写作的重点词汇、短语和句型，达到★☆☆☆级别；
［2］理解重点词汇、短语的使用语境，达到★★☆☆级别；
［3］解答相关重点词汇、短语和句型的题目，达到★★★☆级别；
［4］解答校园生活类主题写作真题，达到★★★★级别。
第一关真题重现
★★★★Level 4
本关进步目标
解答校园生活类主题写作真题，达到★★★★级别。
过关练习
根据要求，完成短文写作。
假设你是李华，你的加拿大朋友David下学期将作为交换生到你的学校学习。他想提前了解你的学校生活，请你写信介绍一下你的作息时间安排，每天上几节课以及你最喜欢的学科。
Dear David,
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第二关文章精讲
★★★☆Level 3
本关进步目标
［1］识记校园生活类主题写作的重点词汇、短语和句型，达到★☆☆台级别；
［2］理解重点词汇、短语的使用语境，达到★★☆☆级别；
［3］解答相关重点词汇、短语和句型的题目，达到★★★☆级别。
过关指南1
校园生活类文章写作框架
Dear David, I'm very happy to tell you something about my school day. I usually get up at six o'clock. After washing my face, I have bread and an egg for breakfast. They are cooked by my mother, healthy and nutritious. Then I prepare to go to school at seven o'clock. There are 5 lessons every day. In the morning, I have Math, English, and P.E. At about 12 o'clock, I have lunch with my classmates in the dining hall. In the afternoon, I have English and Chinese. My favorite subject is English because my English teacher always encourages me when I am under great pressure. With her help I made big progress, which gives me a great sense of achievement. After school, my parents pick me up. I develop the ability to plan my time for study, so it takes me only about two hours to do my homework every day. And I usually go to sleep at about ten o'clock. Not only does my school day keep me busy, but also it can enrich my life. 文章点评：这是一篇校园生活类主题写作。该主题写作常要求介绍校园学习生活、作息安排、课后活动、校规等。第一部分（总）总起：直接开启主题—介绍学校的一天。第二部分（分）上学前:起床，洗漱，然后吃早饭。一天的课程:5节课（上午：数学、英语、体育；下午：英语、语文）。最喜欢的学科:英语，原因是英语老师的鼓励和我取得进步带来的成就感。放学后:父母接我回家，做作业，睡觉。第三部分（总）总结：学校的一天不仅让我忙碌充实，而且也让我的生活丰富多彩。
参考译文：
亲爱的大卫：
我很乐意和你分享我在学校的一天。
我通常六点钟起床。洗完脸后，我早餐吃面包和鸡蛋。早餐是妈妈亲自做的，健康又有营养。然后七点钟我准备去上学。我每天有五节课，上午有数学、英语和体育课。大约十二点时，我和同学们一起在餐厅吃午饭。下午我有英语课和语文课。英语是我最喜欢的科目，因为每当我有压力时，我的英语老师总会鼓励我。在她的帮助下，我取得了很大进步，这给我带来了很大的成就感。放学后，我父母来接我回家。我培养了规划学习时间的能力，所以我每天大约只花两小时做作业。我通常在十点左右就会睡觉。
学校的一天不仅让我忙碌充实，而且也让我的生活变得多彩。
你的朋友，
李华
过关指南2
重点语块
已掌握请打√ 中文释义英文语块
早餐吃面包和鸡蛋 have bread and an egg for breakfast
只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻 all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
自由活动 free time activities
造成很大压力 cause a lot of stress
而不是总依靠老师 instead of depending on teachers all the time
某事萦绕在我的脑海中 something floods my mind
健康又有营养 healthy and nutritious
休息两小时 take a two-hour break
培养做某事的能力 develop the ability to do sth.
取得很大进步 make big progress
语块升级
已掌握请打√ 中文释义常见语块升级语块
有压力 be stressful under great pressure
给我带来了很大的成就感 make me feel successful give me a great sense of achievement
让我的生活变得多彩 make my life colorful enrich my life
学习知识 learn knowledge acquire knowledge
最后 at last last but not least
Exercise
请结合括号内给出的提示信息，转换句子表达。
High school learning is stressful for me. (under great pressure)
I am under great pressure of high school learning.
I think our school should be covered with Wi-Fi because it can make our school life colorful. (enrich)
I think our school should be covered with Wi-Fi because it can enrich our school life.
It’s necessary for our school to open the library more often so that we can learn knowledge by spending time in reading all kinds of interesting and useful books . (acquire knowledge)
It’s necessary for our school to open the library more often so that we can acquire knowledge by spending time in reading all kinds of interesting and useful books .
At last, be ready to help our classmates whenever they need help. (last but not least)
Last but not least, be ready to help our classmates whenever they need help.
I am interested in P.E. because it makes me feel successful . (give me a great sense of achievement)
I am interested in P.E. because it gives me a great sense of achievement
过关指南3
句型升级——参照高级句型仿写句子
句型1：我很乐意和你分享我在学校的一天。
I'm very happy to tell you something about my school day.
使用场景：句型“sb.be(very/so)+adj.+to do sth.”表示“某人（很）·····做某事”，通常位于文章开头，用来开启一个话题，如校园生活。此处的形容词通常为描述人的心情的形容词，后接to do不定式结构。
句型2：我每天大约花两小时做作业。
It take me about two hours to do my homework every day.
使用场景：句型“It takes sb. some time to do sth.”表示“某人花费多长时间做某事”，通常用于
描述校园生活或某人的一天。
句型3：学校的一天不仅让我忙碌充实，而且也让我的生活变得多彩。
Not only does my school day keep me busy, but also it can enrich my life.
使用场景：句型“not only...，but also...”表示“不仅……，而且……”，用于表示两个并列的内容，代替and。这一结构使用范围很广，适合不同的话题或体裁，非常常用。在句型使用中需要注意，not only置于句首时，所接句子为部分倒装，结构为“not only＋一般疑问句语序，but＋陈述句语序”，即“
not only＋助动词+主语+谓语，but also＋主语＋谓语”。
Exercise
运用下列句型仿写句子。
句型1：sb. be (very/so)+ adj.+ to do sth.
蒂姆很幸运有你们这么棒的老师。
Tim is lucky to have such great teachers like you.
我非常难过错过了校车的末班车。
I was very sad to miss the final school bus.
我很高兴我的学校有一个现代化的图书馆，三个漂亮的实验室，一个大操场，一个足球场和一个游泳池。
I am so happy to have a modern library, three beautiful labs, a big playground, a football field and a swimming pool in my school.
汤姆备考的压力很大。
Tom is so stressed to prepare for the exam.
我们对参加科学讲座很有兴趣，因为我们可以用虚拟现实眼镜来享受许多精彩的游戏。
We are very interested to attend the science lecture because we can enjoy many amazing games by using the VR glasses.
句型2：It takes sb．some time to do sth．
他步行到学校要花费二十分钟。
It takes him 20 minutes to walk to school.
结束足球赛还需花费四十五分钟。
It takes three quarters of an hour to complete the football game.
我花四十五分钟时间完成家庭作业。
It takes three quarters of an hour to finish my homework.
我们开车去市中心大约要花两个小时。
It takes us about two hours to drive to the downtown.
我们花了一整天的时间来准备毕业典礼。
It took us a whole day to prepare for the celebration of graduation.
句型3：not only...but also...
这不仅提高了他们的英语口语，而且还给他们带来了很多快乐。
Not only did it improve their spoken English, but also it brought them much fun.
这个活动不仅能够快速提升我的英语水平，而且还能增进来自不同背景的人之间的相互了解。
Not only will the activity improve my English quickly, but also it can enhance the mutual understanding among people from different background.
课后活动不仅可以丰富我们的生活，而且可以改善我们彼此的关系。
After-school activities can not only enrich our life, but also improve our mutual relationship.
上网搜索之前思考一下。这种方式不仅能杜绝简单的抄袭答案，还能提高思维能力。
Think before you search online. Not only does this way stop simply copying the answers, but also it improves thinking abilities.
DIY俱乐部不仅可以丰富我的学校生活，而且可以培养我的独立意识。
The DIY club can not only enrich my school life, but also cultivate my independent consciousness.
过关指南4
句型升级——运用扩句技巧扩写句子
扩句技巧：扩细节
原句：在她的帮助下，我取得了很大进步。
With her help I made big progress.
扩写：在她的帮助下，我取得了很大进步，这给我带来了很大的成就感。
With her help I made big progress，which gives me a great sense of achievement.
Exercise
请根据题干提示，扩写句子。
原句:体育课因为大雨取消了。
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扩解释：体育课因为大雨取消了，这让我们都很失落。
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原句：The P.E. class was cancelled because of the heavey rain.
扩解释：The P.E. class was cancelled because of the heavey rain, which disappinted us all.
原句:我们周五下午有一节音乐课。
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扩解释：我们周五下午有一节音乐课，它通常都很有趣。
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原句：We have a music class on Friday afternoon.
扩解释：We have a music class on Friday afternoon, which is usually interesting.
原句:如今，越来越多的学生参加课外补习班。
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扩解释：如今，越来越多的学生参加课外补习班，这可以让他们意识到学习中的薄弱处。
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原句：Nowadays, more and more students attend after-school classes.
扩解释：Nowadays, more and more students attend after-school classes, which can make them realize their weakness in study.
原句：我喜欢网上购物。
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扩解释：我喜欢网上购物，它能让我有更多的选择，并且让我的生活更方便。
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原句：I like online shopping.
扩解释：I like online shopping, which can give me more choices and make my life more convenient.
原句：在空闲时间，我花很多时间读书。
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扩解释：在空闲时间，我花很多时间读书，这让我有机会了解到更多未知的世界，让我体验不同的经历。
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原句：In my spare time, I spend much time on reading．
扩原因：In my spare time, I spend much time on reading, which gives me a chance to learn more about the unknown world and have different experiences.
第三关真题演练
★★★★Level 4
本关进步目标
解答校园生活类主题写作真题，达到★★★★级别。
过关练习1
根据要求，完成短文写作。
假设你是王辉，你的朋友Lily来信询问你的学校生活，请你根据表格内容给她写一封回信。
要求：
（1）要点全面，可适当发挥；
（2）80词左右。
上课情况上午8:00—12:00四节课下午2:00—4:00两节课
课后打棒球，读书，和朋友们做游戏等
喜欢的学科英语，音乐原因有趣
不喜欢的学科数学太难
Dear Lily,
I’m very happy to tell you something about my school life. ___________________________________
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【范文】
Dear Lily,
I'm very happy to tell you something about my school life. We usually have six classes a day.We start our first class at eight and we have four classes in the morning, and at twelve noon, we start to take a two-hour break. Then we have two classes from two to four in the afternoon. As the old saying goes:“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." Therefore,I often play baseball, read books or play games with my friends after class.These activities make me feel relaxed and happy. My favorite subjects are English and music. Not only are they interesting, but also they give me a great sense of achievement when I acquire knowledge. I don't like math because it is too difficult. A variety of questions flood my mind when I learn it, especially the calculation.
How about your school life I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Hui
【参考译文】
亲爱的莉莉:
我很乐意和你分享我的学校生活。我们通常一天有六节课。我们八点开始上第一节课，上午有四节课，到中午十二点，我们开始休息两个小时。我们下午的两节课是从两点上到四点。俗话说：“只工作不玩要，聪明孩子也变傻。”因此，我经常在课后和朋友一起打棒球、读书或玩游戏，这些活动让我感到轻松愉快。我最喜欢的学科是英语和音乐。它们不仅有趣，而且当我学习知识时,它们会给我带来很大的成就感。我不喜欢数学，因为它太难了。当学习数学时，各种各样的问题萦绕在我的脑海中，尤其是计算。
你的学校生活怎么样？期待你的回复。
你的朋友，
王辉
过关练习2
根据要求，完成短文写作。
最近的调查表明，很多初中生都参加课外补习班，你是否是其中一员呢？请你以“Taking After-school Classes”为题，写一篇80词左右的英文短文，支持或反对参加多个课外班。请给出两到三个论点，并说明理由。
内容要求：
（1）明确立场，逻辑清晰，叙述要有条理；
（2）文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名；
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【范文】
Taking After-school Classes
Nowadays many children are under too much pressure because parents send them to all kinds of after-school classes. As far as I am concerned, children shouldn’t take after- school classes. A variety of reasons flood my mind.
First of all, life shouldn’t just be about grades. After-school classes not only cause a lot of stress which is not good for children’s development， but also they are harmful to children’s health. What’s more, kids should have more free time activities to enrich life. like sports and hanging out with friends. Last but not least, it is important for children to be independent. I firmly believe that it will be better if children can develop the ability to learn by themselves instead of depending on teachers all the time.
As the old saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.＂Therefore. parents should stop pushing their children so hard.
【参考译文】
上课外补习班
现在许多孩子都有很大压力，因为家长总是送他们上各种各样的课外补习班。在我看来，孩子们不应该上课外补习班。许多原因紫绕在我的脑海中。
首先，人生不应该只关注成绩。课外补习班不仅会给孩子们造成很大压力。不利于孩子们的成长，而且对孩子们的健康也是有害的。此外，孩子们应该有更多的自由活动来丰富生活，比如运动、和朋友一起出去玩。最后，对孩子们来说，保持独立很重要。我坚信，如果孩子们能培养独立学习的能力，而不是总依靠老师，那样会更好。
俗话说：“只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。”因此，父母应该停止给孩子们施加如此大的压力。中考英语写作培优课程讲义第四讲
校园生活类作文
进步目标
★★★★Level ④
通过学习和训练，你能够：
［1］识记校园生活类主题写作的重点词汇、短语和句型，达到★☆☆☆级别；
［2］理解重点词汇、短语的使用语境，达到★★☆☆级别；
［3］解答相关重点词汇、短语和句型的题目，达到★★★☆级别；
［4］解答校园生活类主题写作真题，达到★★★★级别。
第一关真题重现
★★★★Level 4
本关进步目标
解答校园生活类主题写作真题，达到★★★★级别。
过关练习
根据要求，完成短文写作。
假设你是李华，你的加拿大朋友David下学期将作为交换生到你的学校学习。他想提前了解你的学校生活，请你写信介绍一下你的作息时间安排，每天上几节课以及你最喜欢的学科。
Dear David,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第二关文章精讲
★★★☆Level 3
本关进步目标
［1］识记校园生活类主题写作的重点词汇、短语和句型，达到★☆☆台级别；
［2］理解重点词汇、短语的使用语境，达到★★☆☆级别；
［3］解答相关重点词汇、短语和句型的题目，达到★★★☆级别。
过关指南1
校园生活类文章写作框架
Dear David, I'm very happy to tell you something about my school day. I usually get up at six o'clock. After washing my face, I have bread and an egg for breakfast. They are cooked by my mother, healthy and nutritious. Then I prepare to go to school at seven o'clock. There are 5 lessons every day. In the morning, I have Math, English, and P.E. At about 12 o'clock, I have lunch with my classmates in the dining hall. In the afternoon, I have English and Chinese. My favorite subject is English because my English teacher always encourages me when I am under great pressure. With her help I made big progress, which gives me a great sense of achievement. After school, my parents pick me up. I develop the ability to plan my time for study, so it takes me only about two hours to do my homework every day. And I usually go to sleep at about ten o'clock. Not only does my school day keep me busy, but also it can enrich my life. 文章点评：这是一篇校园生活类主题写作。该主题写作常要求介绍校园学习生活、作息安排、课后活动、校规等。第一部分（总）总起：第二部分（分）第三部分（总）总结：
过关指南2
重点语块
已掌握请打√ 中文释义英文语块
早餐吃面包和鸡蛋
只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻
自由活动
造成很大压力
而不是总依靠老师
某事萦绕在我的脑海中
健康又有营养
休息两小时
培养做某事的能力
取得很大进步
语块升级
已掌握请打√ 中文释义常见语块升级语块
有压力 be stressful
给我带来了很大的成就感 make me feel successful
让我的生活变得多彩 make my life colorful
学习知识 learn knowledge
最后 at last
Exercise
请结合括号内给出的提示信息，转换句子表达。
High school learning is stressful for me. (under great pressure)
I think our school should be covered with Wi-Fi because it can make our school life colorful. (enrich)
It’s necessary for our school to open the library more often so that we can learn knowledge by spending time in reading all kinds of interesting and useful books . (acquire knowledge)
At last, be ready to help our classmates whenever they need help. (last but not least)
I am interested in P.E. because it makes me feel successful . (give me a great sense of achievement)
过关指南3
句型升级——参照高级句型仿写句子
句型1：我很乐意和你分享我在学校的一天。
I'm very happy to tell you something about my school day.
使用场景：句型“sb.be(very/so)+adj.+to do sth.”表示“某人（很）·····做某事”，通常位于文章开头，用来开启一个话题，如校园生活。此处的形容词通常为描述人的心情的形容词，后接to do不定式结构。
句型2：我每天大约花两小时做作业。
It take me about two hours to do my homework every day.
使用场景：句型“It takes sb. some time to do sth.”表示“某人花费多长时间做某事”，通常用于
描述校园生活或某人的一天。
句型3：学校的一天不仅让我忙碌充实，而且也让我的生活变得多彩。
Not only does my school day keep me busy, but also it can enrich my life.
使用场景：句型“not only...，but also...”表示“不仅……，而且……”，用于表示两个并列的内容，代替and。这一结构使用范围很广，适合不同的话题或体裁，非常常用。在句型使用中需要注意，not only置于句首时，所接句子为部分倒装，结构为“not only＋一般疑问句语序，but＋陈述句语序”，即“
not only＋助动词+主语+谓语，but also＋主语＋谓语”。
Exercise
运用下列句型仿写句子。
句型1：sb. be (very/so)+ adj.+ to do sth.
蒂姆很幸运有你们这么棒的老师。
我非常难过错过了校车的末班车。
我很高兴我的学校有一个现代化的图书馆，三个漂亮的实验室，一个大操场，一个足球场和一个游泳池。
汤姆备考的压力很大。
我们对参加科学讲座很有兴趣，因为我们可以用虚拟现实眼镜来享受许多精彩的游戏。
句型2：It takes sb．some time to do sth．
他步行到学校要花费二十分钟。
结束足球赛还需花费四十五分钟。
我花四十五分钟时间完成家庭作业。
我们开车去市中心大约要花两个小时。
我们花了一整天的时间来准备毕业典礼。
句型3：not only...but also...
这不仅提高了他们的英语口语，而且还给他们带来了很多快乐。
这个活动不仅能够快速提升我的英语水平，而且还能增进来自不同背景的人之间的相互了解。
课后活动不仅可以丰富我们的生活，而且可以改善我们彼此的关系。
上网搜索之前思考一下。这种方式不仅能杜绝简单的抄袭答案，还能提高思维能力。
DIY俱乐部不仅可以丰富我的学校生活，而且可以培养我的独立意识。
过关指南4
句型升级——运用扩句技巧扩写句子
扩句技巧：扩细节
原句：在她的帮助下，我取得了很大进步。
With her help I made big progress.
扩写：在她的帮助下，我取得了很大进步，这给我带来了很大的成就感。
With her help I made big progress，which gives me a great sense of achievement.
Exercise
请根据题干提示，扩写句子。
原句:体育课因为大雨取消了。
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扩解释：体育课因为大雨取消了，这让我们都很失落。
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原句:我们周五下午有一节音乐课。
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扩解释：我们周五下午有一节音乐课，它通常都很有趣。
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原句:如今，越来越多的学生参加课外补习班。
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扩解释：如今，越来越多的学生参加课外补习班，这可以让他们意识到学习中的薄弱处。
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原句：我喜欢网上购物。
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扩解释：我喜欢网上购物，它能让我有更多的选择，并且让我的生活更方便。
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原句：在空闲时间，我花很多时间读书。
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扩解释：在空闲时间，我花很多时间读书，这让我有机会了解到更多未知的世界，让我体验不同的经历。
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第三关真题演练
★★★★Level 4
本关进步目标
解答校园生活类主题写作真题，达到★★★★级别。
过关练习1
根据要求，完成短文写作。
假设你是王辉，你的朋友Lily来信询问你的学校生活，请你根据表格内容给她写一封回信。
要求：
要点全面，可适当发挥；80词左右。
上课情况上午8:00—12:00四节课下午2:00—4:00两节课
课后打棒球，读书，和朋友们做游戏等
喜欢的学科英语，音乐原因有趣
不喜欢的学科数学太难
Dear Lily,
I’m very happy to tell you something about my school life. ___________________________________
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过关练习2
根据要求，完成短文写作。
最近的调查表明，很多初中生都参加课外补习班，你是否是其中一员呢？请你以“Taking After-school Classes”为题，写一篇80词左右的英文短文，支持或反对参加多个课外班。请给出两到三个论点，并说明理由。
内容要求：
（1）明确立场，逻辑清晰，叙述要有条理；
（2）文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名；
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